tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post4709992494399975292..comments2023-08-25T06:00:00.011-07:00Comments on My musings...: Migratory (Birds)Yuvikahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12871366730928566530noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-4205957491857685102011-12-19T08:29:51.598-08:002011-12-19T08:29:51.598-08:00:):)Yuvikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871366730928566530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-73460653957179767472011-12-19T08:19:04.372-08:002011-12-19T08:19:04.372-08:00That,s so flowing like life itself.That,s so flowing like life itself.sreehttp://writingonjusttowrite.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-69763050948368191172011-12-18T09:15:41.337-08:002011-12-18T09:15:41.337-08:00yes, life is big!
thank u!yes, life is big! <br />thank u!Yuvikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871366730928566530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-50602089210425997802011-12-17T17:31:30.934-08:002011-12-17T17:31:30.934-08:00Yuvika..you so right. Easy to pack up, fly away. H...Yuvika..you so right. Easy to pack up, fly away. Happy like birds. True then, returning, bridges are destroyed, and nobody 'waiting'.<br /><br />Sometimes, the dinner is worth the price. Life is BIG!<br /><br />PEACE!<br />All is well.....steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-11091149642487148452011-12-17T12:44:55.025-08:002011-12-17T12:44:55.025-08:00I wish I cud - I only rarely find my muse!I wish I cud - I only rarely find my muse!Yuvikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871366730928566530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-90357136719555741202011-12-17T11:38:19.672-08:002011-12-17T11:38:19.672-08:00Beautiful. Yes, you should write poems more often....Beautiful. Yes, you should write poems more often..like twice a day..:D :DJyotihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563445480737122350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-60673935768331931462011-12-17T10:02:02.718-08:002011-12-17T10:02:02.718-08:00Yes, isn;t grass always greener and the sky always...Yes, isn;t grass always greener and the sky always inviting on the other side :) though I wonder if the birds ever envy usYuvikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871366730928566530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-43490523966025656462011-12-17T08:24:06.223-08:002011-12-17T08:24:06.223-08:00Thank you all for writing in - really appreciate a...Thank you all for writing in - really appreciate all your encouragement.<br /><br />@Susan: nope, not moving :)Yuvikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871366730928566530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-26171649716188220922011-12-16T23:22:17.527-08:002011-12-16T23:22:17.527-08:00As has often been shown, the simplicity enchances,...As has often been shown, the simplicity enchances, rather than undercuts, the excellence of this poem. <br /><br />I liked the "consonance" - whether intentional or not - in cases like "barren" ~ "haven", "leave" ~ "thrive" and "us" ~ "fetters" ~ "heavens" ~ "verses" ~ happiness" as it serves to contrast and compare related images.<br /><br />The last stanza was hard-hitting, especially the concluding lines:<br /><br />"But when they grow tired, yearning to return -<br />Their paths lie burnt, and nobody awaits." <br /><br />My favourite lines, however, were the ones below: they take the poem to a different level. <br /><br />"What we abandon is not home,<br />What we come back to, will surely be."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-21679820181116768632011-12-16T22:31:53.508-08:002011-12-16T22:31:53.508-08:00lovely poem.... so very realistic...lovely poem.... so very realistic...Kartik Sonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06490026784658914957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-77536931689558762442011-12-16T22:31:13.331-08:002011-12-16T22:31:13.331-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Kartik Sonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06490026784658914957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-87824535471457550312011-12-16T21:30:54.093-08:002011-12-16T21:30:54.093-08:00Didn't I tell you, you should write poems more...Didn't I tell you, you should write poems more often? <br /><br />I loved that it is from a bird's perspective and how much it tells about human nature.Sameerahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16387105701575296119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-37329875722961369312011-12-16T19:51:06.925-08:002011-12-16T19:51:06.925-08:00Are you moving again?
Wonderful to see the muse r...Are you moving again?<br /><br />Wonderful to see the muse rise up within you.<br /><br />Joy always,<br />SusanS. Susan Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08885957854901839400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-707040231871685356.post-66868642702980499762011-12-16T11:48:47.650-08:002011-12-16T11:48:47.650-08:00if only it was so easy to pack bags and jsut leave...if only it was so easy to pack bags and jsut leave .. <br />birds are so lucky they can go where they want when they want .. <br /><br />a beautiful poem ..<br />some truth in the end .. a bit sad tooo .. I know <br /><br />I have come so far from home I hope when i go back home all is there I had written a punjabi poem on something like that .. <br /><br /> <br /><br /><a href="http://mannbikram.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Bikram's</a>Bikramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17320753339263375295noreply@blogger.com